Friday, May 21, 2021

how to take care of banjo rabbit

 banjo is a rabbit that is very kind. He is shy and is very fussy but he still makes you happy. Banjo has been trained to walk with  a lead.



Writing Lesson May 17th - Procedural writing. 


Pet Sitting


Purpose: To write instructions for a pet-sitter. 


My Writing goal is: linking words as well as descriptive words 


Success Criteria 



Beginning

Improving

Striving for excellence

  • Say my sentences before writing

  • Leave spaces between words

  • Write all the sounds I can hear in words

  • Write a title

  • List the equipment

  • Write clear instructions

  • Write a title 

  • List the equipment

  • Write clear instructions which explain exactly what to do and when. 

  • Use precise vocabulary



Banjo rabbit 

 


Equipment

Pooper scooper

Food ( pellets ) 

Water 

Wood shavings 

Water bottle

Food container  

A lead / harness

Shelter



How to take care of banjo 


  1. First when you are looking after Banjo you need to make sure he has enough water.Because he is a growing pet and needs his water. Banjo needs about 2 litres of water a day.

  2. Secondly when you're looking after banjo you need to make sure he has lots of food around about 3 big handfuls a day.

  3. A growing pet needs exercise. So you need to take a banjo on walks every day. Take him on walks at lunchtime and before you have dinner.And be careful because he scratches when putting on the harness. instructions on how to put a harness on a rabbit down the bottom.

  4.  So have fun looking after a pet. 



instructions on how to put on a rabbit harness

start off with your neckclip take your rabbit and hold it in your left hand take your right hand with your clip then take your hand from the rabbit and pull the clip around its neck.then you need to do the tummy clip grab the two clips and put it under tummy and clip together. 


1 comment:

  1. I like your procedural writing. it is very detailed and tells me alot about your bunnies.but have you got imformation on how banjo will act with you around? if you do it again i reckon you might want to have some diffrent starters for the sentance. just to mix it up.

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