Thursday, June 17, 2021

staying on land

 Staying on land 



Dear chief  

I am writing to you because i would like to stay on land i understand that there will be many applications but i think i've got one best i have 3 great reason on why i think i should get to stay and i don’t know about you but i wouldn't like to go on a boat that could lead to potential death i know i don’t. But I really appreciate the offer but I would like to stay on land.


Reason 1  in my life time i had been to many different countries and every chief i have visited said that i had does the best at keeping the Island spick and spam very clean. I can clean your house anything just let me stay 



Reason 2  when  it comes to kids and babies I'm the one you need to see.I know lots about children how they react to things. I know everything, in fact I won awade on the best babysitter so there you have to choose me to stay. 



Reason 3 I can climb a tree you need someone who can do that for food 


I know that there will be many  applications and it will be very hard to choose but i’m say do not put me a board on the horouta Waka I will drown.





4 comments:

  1. Well organised into paragraphs Ruby, but perhaps your could use connective like firstly, secondly, thirdly for example. I expect a reply!!

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  2. Some capital I's to sort our as well

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  3. thanks i will do that

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  4. Hi Ruby Put some Capital letters.

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